Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Whoops!


WHOOPS!



I think, as we look back on our lives, there may be some things that we perhaps think we should not have done.  I would like you to think of one of those things and tell us 'the tale' now that a lot of time has passed from the time the incident happened.  I'd also like you possibly to reflect back on it from today's perspective.  Even though you 'shouldn't have' done it, are you glad you did?



I'm thinking of a time in my life when I was in 8th grade.  It was early evening, and I went for a walk with three friends to a park that was near a yacht club. On a whim we decided to walk down and look at the boats.  While we were there, two young men who were drinking beer invited us to come onto their boat.  I had a bad feeling about this, but the others wanted to; so I went along with it.  After all the three others thought it was okay.  Well, it did turn out all right.  Nothing bad happened; but I knew that it could have.  When I returned home, I didn't tell my parents.....which was a sign to me that I really knew I shouldn't have got on that boat.

 Am I glad this happened?  I do think so, as I did learn a lesson.  I learned a lesson without anything bad happening.  I knew that there wouldn't be a next time with this situation.  I haven't told my story here in poetry form, but I might......or I might choose to write about something else. 



Anyway, how about you?  What 'shouldn't you have done' in the long ago (or not so long ago) past? Tell us the tale poetically.  And somewhere in the poem let us know if now, looking back, you have regrets or whether somehow it's become part of your life history in a way that's okay.

I really am looking forward to seeing what you write about.  I'll be visiting the blogs of each of you who links, using Mr. Linky below, a new poem written for this prompt.  And I hope each of you who links will make the rounds as well.

Mary from  In the Corner of My Eye.




38 comments:

  1. interesting topic mary...i know i have made quite a few in my day...smiles...will give this some thought and try to get it up tomorrow...

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    1. Ha, Brian!! We all have. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with. Thanks for your ongoing support of Poetry Jam.

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    2. Brian, you bring a smile to my face with that 'try to get it up tomorrow' line! Sorry, couldn't resist! On second thought this could be my whoops!

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    3. Helen, I am not going to touch that comment...LOL. Looking forward to what you come up with for the prompt as well.

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    4. well i did not have a problem last night...actually wrote about half of it...smiles...oo that was a bellow the belt comment helen...lesser men would whither...haha...we are bad

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  2. Okay, this is a topic I could respond to with a hundred very embarrassing moments. I will sleep on it, and see what the Angel of the Morning whispers into my ear when I wake up:)

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    1. Speak, oh Angel!! I am anticipating.

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  3. Great prompt! Instead of writing about one of a multitude of bad choices I've made, I ended up writing about a more gradual choice that sort of evolved in life...but I think it still fits. Looking forward to seeing what everyone else comes up with!

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    1. It IS interesting how our choices sometimes evolve, isn't it? After a while we may not even be aware of how we happened to get 'there.'

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  4. not exactly what you had in mind, Mary ~ it IS a woman's regrets and how she feels about them now ~ it's just not MY regrets. i'll try to muster the courage to tackle one before the prompt ends. {smile}

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    1. Yours did fill the bill, Dani. If you come up with another one, feel free to share that as well.

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  5. Sometimes 'wrong' turns out 'right'!

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    1. Often happens, I think, Jinksy!

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  6. Please, after you post your link, DO visit other poets who post throughout the week. We all enjoy visits and comments!

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  7. Great prompt Mary. Will be round to visit others once the dog has had his walk.

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    1. I enjoyed your poem, Bren! I'm about to take a dog out for a walk too.

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  8. there you go...i am in...and will be visiting those that returned comments last week...and anyone that visits

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    1. I understand completely, Brian! It should be a two-way street.

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  9. Oh, this theme is so, so cute! I hope to be able to participate, but I have been SO busy lately and feel guilty if I am unable to return the favor of reading. (if anyone wants to know, summer plus six kids is NOT relaxing :) But, I'm sure I will look back and say "that was fun". ;)

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    1. I understand, Margaret. Six kids during summer break would be challenging, but yes, someday you will consider these years your best ever.

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    1. Glad you love it, Ginger. Happy to see you taking part in Poetry Jam.

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  11. Oh ow. There were way too many to choose from--went with one of the safer choices...looking forward to reading others :-)

    The comments were really fun tonight

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    1. Hi Sara, always glad to see you here. As for comments....sometimes ya just gotta laugh and have a bit of fun!

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    2. Thank you Mary:-) Love to laugh---just made me thimk of that Mary Poppins song...enjoyed your poetic adventure!

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  12. A thought-provoking prompt, Mary! Thanks! Just made it and posted mine. Will visit everyone in the next couple of days. xx

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    1. Thanks, Loredana. You are always good about that!! xx to you too.

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  13. Good theme, especially for me with my motto of "real is better than perfect." i love the photo with the whiteout - so true to life. I had a moment of real regret last night, so the prompt was not only right down my alley, but well timed. I will read others posts and comment throught the week - need to sleep now,

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    1. Glad to see you (and your poem) here!

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  14. Very cool fun... I hope you don't mind if I joined in!

    http://seasonsandreasons.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/hindered-by-hindsight-ruined-in.html

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    1. Thanks for your participation! You jumped in with QUITE a poem.

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  15. My first time here. My poem is about making a mistake which was inadvertent like the litany of mistakes I constantly make in life and trying to get a poem on here but be another one added to the never ending list:)

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    1. Welcome to Poetry Jam!! New folks are always welcome.

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  16. Ooo good one!!! Wrote something but need to revise and post later when I get back from the beach! Smiles to everyone and thank you for the prompt and post of your memories, Peggy. :)

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    1. Will look forward to it, Hannah. Enjoy your time at the beach. And, as this is a "Whoops" week, I'll the prompt and the memory shared in it were mine. I do know who's who can be confusing.

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  17. No question, no time needed to know that .....some things could have had bad results but in the total time and as life goes on today...Learning from mistakes is one of the things I do best so....Yep, there were mistakes to learn from for sure. I bet if I wanted a list I could ask my kids LOL

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    1. Yes, nothing like a child to help you remember your mistakes:-) very funny comment

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  18. Fine..a platform for all regrets and thoughtful musings....

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